My Script - Feedback Appreciated

[Jophess]

Hello, everyone. If you could give me some feedback on my script (it's around 60 pages right now), I would be highly appreciative. Here's the link :

http://www.scriptbuddy.com/community/?p=4291529105&t=&pg=2

Here's a short synopsis :

A political, social, and cultural satire that takes place in the year 2036 and revolves around the death of a famous actress.

A longer synopsis :

In this cultural satire, Jonathan and Robert find themselves 30 years into the future, where the world has taken a surprising turn. While learning the events of the past 30 years, they try and find their old best friend in Hollywood.

Thanks much.

[JeSsIcA_LUV]

u spelled holleywood wrong

[Vanity]

u spelled holleywood wrong

No, you did.

[Jophess]

Please, somebody help? BWilli, I'd definitely love to hear your feedback. I'm going intro production later this month.