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The Phone's Hung Up
« on: March 24, 2004, 09:20:20 pm »
Do you hear my voice whe you try to sleep?
Like those Spring nights when we sang to each other, and we,
Filled up every second with something we'd lived for.
And when you get up and you undress,
Just to redress into something new,
Do you wish that I was there to tell you how great the night was,
Because I spent it with you?
And when you get to your car and it starts to rain,
Do you wonder if it's raining where I am?
It's pouring where I am.
When you sit at work and you're bored to death,
But look at the phone, convinced that I will call you,
To better your day do you realize how far I'm away?
When you get back home and sit by yourself,
With a box of letters and a burning match,
Do you wish I was still at home?
When you say good-night to your TV set,
Or the lighter by the cigarettes,
You swore you'd never smoke again,
But you got nervous.
Do you regret being weak and losing your touch?
You've lost your touch.
Do you hear my voice when you try to sleep?
Like those Spring nights when we sang to each other, and we,
Filled up every second with something we'd lived for.

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« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2004, 11:18:13 am »
i can relate to that... exellent job Cece

Things are going crazy and I'm not sure who to blame...
November 9th 2004...H a r m o n i u m!!!
Spare me just three last words, I love you is all she heard...

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« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2004, 12:38:35 pm »
A work of art.
The distance between insanity and genius is measured only by success.

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« Reply #3 on: March 25, 2004, 03:02:04 pm »
I love it, you're writing is amazing!
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« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2004, 10:57:21 am »
Amazing  :D You have such good writing technique Cece!!

xoxox

Thank so much for the sig Scotty!! <3 It's gorgeous!

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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2004, 09:03:36 am »
wow, thats all i can say. i absolutely love all ur writing, its fantastic!

well done!!

Lisa xxx

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« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2004, 09:41:17 am »
love it

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« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2004, 10:16:24 am »
Thank youuuuuu

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« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2004, 10:27:22 am »
Yeah, i really like it Cece- its like something beyond your life, something that you haven't experienced yet (or maybe u have!) but you manage to write about it really well.
"I'm all about the wordplay."

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« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2004, 10:29:26 am »
Thanks, Rosie ;)