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#2- About givin it back to a bully
« on: August 07, 2003, 01:04:45 pm »
Learn my name and say it right
You've got the blame on my fight
Don't touch my stuff, make it unclean
You ain't so tough, quit bein' mean
You thrive on power, I sink in pain
This is one last hour I'll play this game

CHORUS:
In my blood and my sweat
I'll stand my ground
And my strength with be there
Your cries will resound
When you fall in the mud
In the pouring rain
As your world and your name
I claim

Take it back, that which you said
And the smack you gave me upside my head
As you walked past my desk
You talked, made them ask
Made them laugh and give me eyes
But half your words are mere lies

BRIDGE:
Don't tell me I'm some nobody
I'm more than just a somebody
Your fame is so lame
When you play this dumb game
But now you'll see your life
And it won't ever be the same
Cuz

CHORUS:
In my blood and my sweat
I'll stand my ground
And my strength will be there
Your cries will resound
When you fall in the mud
In the pouring rain
As your world and your name
I claim

...

Dont mess with me
I'm bigger than you
In my mind and my soul
All I've said is so true

Whatcha think? Please tell me... is it better than the first one or no??

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#2- About givin it back to a bully
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2003, 01:49:24 pm »
I like it, very good Mal. The first one is really good too. I like them both.

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#2- About givin it back to a bully
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2003, 01:50:55 pm »
thats real good! nice work mal
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#2- About givin it back to a bully
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2003, 01:57:02 pm »
Coolness, my usual responce...hehe!

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