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I Can (all new audio AND lyrics)
« on: August 30, 2003, 07:57:35 pm »
:cD

http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/oh5/mallory0/ican.wav

There ya go Joey! I just wrote this today! It oughta make up for the vocals you weren't so thrilled about last time. ;c)

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« Reply #1 on: August 31, 2003, 07:26:01 am »
hehe! *downloading* So freaking excited!

EDIT: Holy crap, it won't work! I'll try it again..

EDIT 2: It worked! Beautiful so far.
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« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2003, 07:29:31 am »
Yeah thats weird, I dunno whats wrong with it... It worked for me. :)

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« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2003, 07:35:54 am »
LYRICS--

Oohh Yeah
Don't tell me I can't

When walls cave in on me
And you tell me I can't stand
A chance, I have in me
And I believe that I can

ooo
I'll do all that I can
To prove it to
You
And how
Can you say these things
When you won't win
Now?

While the world is stuck in pain and grief
Like the gum on your shoe
Its hurts, and robs me like a thief
But I know I'll make it through

ooo
I'll do all that I can
To prove it to
You
And how
Can you say these things
When you won't win
Now?

ooo
Don't tell me I can't

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« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2003, 07:37:05 am »
It worked, and I love it, now I am listening to "Rain Falls", and My Strength Be There and Portrait of Perfection. "I Can" is really good! I love the message. Sort of like Aaliyah's "Try Again" in a different style.
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« Reply #5 on: August 31, 2003, 07:38:46 am »
You seem on a writing streak... Are you going to make any more?
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« Reply #6 on: August 31, 2003, 09:49:50 am »
:o  :o  :o  oh man! Mal, thats really amazing! I loved ur other two songs but this ones even better i think! You have even more of a range than i thought! Keep singin and playin hun! Youre so talented!!!!
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« Reply #7 on: August 31, 2003, 01:46:38 pm »
I like this one too, I dunno... Its just so short and the piano is repetitive. Not to mention, haha, I BARELY use my right hand at all!! Soo... I'm sorta still twiddlin' with it and seeing if I can find anything for the hand to do but I still think it'll pretty much sound the same over all.

I'm glad you liked it, ... I think vocally this too is my favorite.

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« Reply #8 on: August 31, 2003, 05:00:47 pm »
Good :)

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« Reply #9 on: September 10, 2003, 10:56:06 am »
Just checking out my new sig, thats all. Don't mind lil' ole' me. ;c)

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« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2003, 10:56:25 am »
lol it needs some work.

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« Reply #11 on: September 10, 2003, 11:56:52 am »
you left out the word "faith"
in the lyrics
: )



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« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2003, 12:09:22 pm »
Removed
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« Reply #13 on: September 23, 2003, 04:37:08 pm »
Removed. Its a simple rule, don't insult other users -Kev222
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« Reply #14 on: September 23, 2003, 04:43:29 pm »
Quote from: "Bianca"
Removed.


well we got the criticism...the constructive part, i don't tend to see.