Author Topic: "Try Again Tomorrow" (Read 3021 times)

Alecs · « **on:** February 05, 2004, 09:40:25 pm »

I wanna put it down for awhile
Maybe forever
Just put it back where I found it
Start over looking for something
I haven't found

I can't figure it out
Can't figure it in
Can't justify what you've been
to me...

You let it loose
You let it free
Oh the agony
It's killing me

You let it slip, tease, seethe, and
decrease my security
You keep making me question your purity

I shouldn't complain
I knew it all along
I kept it up
whether right or wrong
I try to forget it
I try to ignore
All my dignity
Out on the floor

I can move, but I can't leave
This all belongs to me

Truth so real
So narrow
I feel
This sorrow

Try again tomorrow

clamicas · « **Reply #1 on:** February 06, 2004, 03:49:19 pm »

I hear rock in the background.... is it just me? :wink:
I think it'd b a cool song

vanessafan18 · « **Reply #2 on:** February 08, 2004, 02:50:39 am »

That's so good, yeh I can so imagine that turning into a great rock tune! Nice work

xoxoxoxox

jlmusicchick · « **Reply #3 on:** February 08, 2004, 08:37:11 am »

I love it!

Alecs · « **Reply #4 on:** February 12, 2004, 02:23:54 pm »

Thanks you guys.

I need to write more. I kinda stopped for a long time for some reason. I used to write all the time.

jlmusicchick · « **Reply #5 on:** February 12, 2004, 03:24:27 pm »

Quote from: "Alecs"

Thanks you guys.

I need to write more. I kinda stopped for a long time for some reason. I used to write all the time.

lol me too! i don't really write that much poetry anymore...sometimes when i'm falling asleep i'll think of lines of poetry, or even when i'm dreaming...but i usually don't remeber them when i wake up :-P You should post more of your stuff!

Alecs · « **Reply #6 on:** June 06, 2004, 02:49:56 pm »

your right. I should. actually I should write some new stuff and post it huh... :?

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