The Psitharism...

[jlmusicchick]

The Psitharism

I tried to love the psitharism,
So sweet and melodic,
That rustling could have swept me away.

Those rustic green leaves
Transfixed my eyes
Captivated my sould
And sucked me into its sweet maple viens.

I float....
Numbed in the tasteful mix of bliss
And ignorance.
Strong sturdy branches kept the flow
And i was invincable
We were invincable.

That soothing psitharism swirled around me,
surrounded me,
Became a part of me.
Taking out everything bad,
And leaving me with an elated high.

Those rustic green leaves soon started to change,
Fading slowly to brown.
The psitharism, once warm and familiar,
Grew alien and cold, nipping my skin.

The leaves fell, one by one
And the psitharism,
as all good things do,
ended abruptly.

I should have known better
Than tto try and love
Something so flighty
and impossible to count on.

I should have known better
than to waste feelings only to be taken
raised up,
and flown away.

I should have known,
that the psitharism,
So lovely and charming,
would leave me,
In a forest of empty trees.



why jessica doesn't do relationships.  :evil:  :-P

[Dancernl]

i'd understand it better if I knew what that P word meant... :?

[jlmusicchick]

Psitharism sounds like Sith-are-ism. it means the whistling or rustling sound that trees make.

[MyLifeIsLikeATM]

knowing what the word means makes it all the better. good job, i like it

[jlmusicchick]

thank you  

[LimeTwister]

*goes to read a dictionary like it's a novel*

[jlmusicchick]

*goes to read a dictionary like it's a novel*

lol, i discovered the word when i played this one game with my poetry class a few years ago. someone says a word that's really hard and random, and you have to guess what it means. who ever comes closest wins a point. it's an interest game, you learn fun words, like psitharism :-P

[Dancernl]

*goes to read a dictionary like it's a novel*

lol, my sister is so much smarter than me!  Great poem Jessie!

[LimeTwister]

*goes to read a dictionary like it's a novel*

lol, i discovered the word when i played this one game with my poetry class a few years ago. someone says a word that's really hard and random, and you have to guess what it means. who ever comes closest wins a point. it's an interest game, you learn fun words, like psitharism :-P

or if you're me...you learn nothing...lol

(sorry just post whoring...3000 baby!! woo)

[jlmusicchick]

*goes to read a dictionary like it's a novel*

lol, i discovered the word when i played this one game with my poetry class a few years ago. someone says a word that's really hard and random, and you have to guess what it means. who ever comes closest wins a point. it's an interest game, you learn fun words, like psitharism :-P

or if you're me...you learn nothing...lol

(sorry just post whoring...3000 baby!! woo)

lol, it's a fun game. it's okay limey, being an occasional pw never hurt anyone :-P

[rosieposy87]

Ooh 'Ro' likes it, especially the empty forest part at the end. It reads really well, yuppp good on ya.

[jlmusicchick]

Ooh 'Ro' likes it, especially the empty forest part at the end. It reads really well, yuppp good on ya.

lol thank you Ro :-P

[Mountaineer]

OMG! :cry:  loved it!!! i can relate

[jlmusicchick]

OMG! :cry:  loved it!!! i can relate

thanks bee!

[milf guy]

that was actually a really good poem!

its not often i enjoy poetry, but that was actually fun. ima print it off and read it some more so i can get a better feel for what everything means!

great work!