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« on: February 12, 2007, 08:50:07 pm »
Yea I thought I would write lyrics to this song, but nope, I don't think it'll ever happen. So here's a little piano tune. I'm toying with the name "good grief!" but I dunno yet. Let me know what you think!

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« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2007, 02:17:57 am »
WOW.... 8O ...Your good!!!
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« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2007, 08:47:00 am »
I really like this! Though my only criticism is that the arpeggiation you have going on in the right hand gets a little tedious at times (change it up a little) but cool melody and good style.

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« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2007, 10:51:00 am »
Nice!! I agree with Amanda about the repetitiveness, but it's way better than anything I could write. It seems a little bit rushed at times, but overall it's really cool sounding. I think "Good Grief!" is a good title, too :)

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« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2007, 07:36:04 pm »
thanks guys! Yea I have a really hard time avoiding repetition... but I have some ideas about how to change it up, I just haven't gotten to a piano in a while. I'm glad I can get some advice on here!

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« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2007, 12:42:20 pm »
I <3 it!  :wink:

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« Reply #6 on: March 24, 2007, 11:09:02 pm »
You're so good  :D
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