Author Topic: "Good Grief!" (Read 4914 times)

me and my piano---tim · « **on:** February 12, 2007, 08:50:07 pm »

Yea I thought I would write lyrics to this song, but nope, I don't think it'll ever happen. So here's a little piano tune. I'm toying with the name "good grief!" but I dunno yet. Let me know what you think!

myspace.com/timothyheyer (I hardly ever check this)
If that doesn't work, http://download.yousendit.com/4EABEA491A2A632A

joey · « **Reply #1 on:** February 13, 2007, 02:17:57 am »

WOW.... 8O ...Your good!!!

JazzyManda · « **Reply #2 on:** February 13, 2007, 08:47:00 am »

I really like this! Though my only criticism is that the arpeggiation you have going on in the right hand gets a little tedious at times (change it up a little) but cool melody and good style.

Amanda

NoelleNC · « **Reply #3 on:** February 13, 2007, 10:51:00 am »

Nice!! I agree with Amanda about the repetitiveness, but it's way better than anything I could write. It seems a little bit rushed at times, but overall it's really cool sounding. I think "Good Grief!" is a good title, too

me and my piano---tim · « **Reply #4 on:** February 13, 2007, 07:36:04 pm »

thanks guys! Yea I have a really hard time avoiding repetition... but I have some ideas about how to change it up, I just haven't gotten to a piano in a while. I'm glad I can get some advice on here!

Manny · « **Reply #5 on:** February 17, 2007, 12:42:20 pm »

I <3 it! :wink:

MeganJane · « **Reply #6 on:** March 24, 2007, 11:09:02 pm »

You're so good

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