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« on: April 07, 2003, 09:29:21 am »
Please only post YOUR poetry in this thread!  :D

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« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2003, 10:38:30 am »
Beautiful


Dancing spark flutter lullabies eyes
Butterflies fold in still fly
Nighttime sweet memory
Warm sunlit vines sway carefully
Hooked ends grasp gently
Looks bends back inside me
Captivation without obscenity
Stitched gap tenderly
Single petal sheds a drop
Silently it’s peace serene
Unique never alone with itself
Cradled elevation invitation
Weak beams creak footsteps
Dragging fingers catch dust
Light wind scatters eloquent
I love today an element
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one of my better poems
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2003, 10:44:21 am »
I Hate Poetry (written for Senior English)

I hate poetry
as you will soon see
it makes me mad
'cause it's all bad
and won't agree with me

That's a haiku, right?
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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2003, 01:02:52 pm »
Um no.....

Here is my haiku....

Plataeus (sp?)

Flat top, ridgid edge.
Very tall and mountain-like.
Sand all around it.

Kinda boring.

I have more than that! I will post some elsewhere.
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« Reply #4 on: April 08, 2003, 06:43:11 am »
i don't normally share much of my poetry because it is really personal but this is really old so ... I will share one ... plus i know reading tons and tons of poetry can be boring to sift through....

FACADE

Creeping through hallways
Peering through faded eyes
Trying not to be noticed
Wearing this disguise
Why when they knock they are not allowed to see
Leaving me as I am
mystery
I want to let you inside, I do
first to myself must learn to be true
--SP 8/98

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« Reply #5 on: April 08, 2003, 12:33:58 pm »
Quote from: "divasteph"
i don't normally share much of my poetry because it is really personal but this is really old so ... I will share one ... plus i know reading tons and tons of poetry can be boring to sift through....


same here.

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« Reply #6 on: April 09, 2003, 09:18:14 am »
Another Poem ...

Untitled...

The Corner's of my head are bent and worn
Taking big leaps, leaves my ankles sore
How will I reach my infinitive place
If I cannot survive the day to day

-SP

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hmmmm
« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2003, 05:14:03 pm »
ive never been here before, but i wrote a poem yesterday while i was slightly not there but thats ok, lemme find it and then post it :lol:

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ok here it is
« Reply #8 on: April 13, 2003, 05:15:44 pm »
THE You....

when i think of the you
he would have no idea what i was thinking
when i talked to the you
he wouldnt know that i i hadnt been drinking
sometimes the you would have thoughts of things
that he thinks only come out of my mouth when i rings
to him when im slightly not there
but im always there
when hes there to talk to
hes the you
hes a one
hes MYu
he is
YOU

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« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2003, 06:21:59 pm »
haha...How much did you have to drink last night Sarah?

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haha
« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2003, 03:18:10 pm »
wellll
i didnt have much at all
it was something else i was under the influence of

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« Reply #11 on: April 21, 2003, 07:57:09 pm »
hmm
noones replied about my poem
how sad

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« Reply #12 on: April 22, 2003, 05:48:19 pm »
I replied about it! I likede it!

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heres one
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2003, 02:25:49 pm »
i wrote it like a week and 1/2 ago, its my way of just letting things go, this poem was really cool though i wasnt even thinking, this was all what my pen wrote (haha sounds crazy but i cant even remember thinking any of this) ...wicked cool feeling!

"unlit"

it kills to watch
'the one' walk by
i feel stung
by some unwatned fly
as love burns inside
one eye follows
one eye wanders
watching him go by
i know i'll get hurt
so why waste time
i just want so bad
for someone to be mine
why do i sink so low
and go underneath the shallows
to see what you give
to yearn inside to even live
i want it before this candle goes unlit
and i wont have anything
but the love that i never got to give
i dont want to live this life
full of regrets that just might
cause this candle to be less of a delight
i dont want it to end
i dont know what to do
all i can think
is to follow right after you
i follow straight on the imprinted steps
something that my mind has already set
as perfect for a guide
within each deep stride
i hope to find the answers
i hope to find you
possibly waiting for me
then i can live up to
the fantasies that could be
i open the door
don't even know your name
and you probably shouldnt know my 'claim to fame'
you move even mysteriously closer now
raising your perfect brown eyebrow
with your sweet deep eyes
looking back into mine
until both ours are closed
and the sensation is what i remember most
i had that one kiss
the one i didnt want to miss
i fell in love
until the day my candle went unlit
and still inside
i know i have you to thank for it

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« Reply #14 on: April 27, 2003, 02:30:24 pm »
Thats a cool poem melly.  :D
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