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Ana Speaks Slow And Quiet.
« on: February 03, 2004, 06:33:04 pm »
“Ana speaks slow and quiet”
There is a song
that some hear
when seeing their face
in porcelain,
or their lies
in mirrors.
Striving for an absolute
they can never reach.
Starving for a perfection
they will never find.
Ana sings slow and quiet
while showing dolls;
many plastic passions.
When Ana crescendos
the world falls away
into a pulse machine
and healers words.
But after the tune,
in Ana’s silence,
all that’s left is
a wire frame and
a half beating heart.
-- there are people who take the heart out of you, and those who put it back in --

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« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2004, 06:42:27 pm »
wow!! I liked it ;) :D

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« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2004, 06:43:45 pm »
Quote from: "clamicas"
wow!! I liked it ;) :D


Thanks a bunch. ; )
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« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2004, 07:42:05 pm »
Hey Crissy,

Might I know Anna?

T.
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« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2004, 06:38:50 am »
Awesome... 8O

I love it.
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« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2004, 07:00:03 am »
thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!

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« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2004, 07:17:08 am »
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thats one of the best i have read on here --- bravo!

yup, exactly

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« Reply #7 on: February 04, 2004, 10:33:24 am »
wow!!

that is so cool! well done sweetie

love ya

Lisa xxx

ps. reply to my emails!! :)

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« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2004, 11:02:50 am »
Oh i really really liked it, the rhythm is good- in line with the mood of the poem. Seriously, its really good.
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« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2004, 11:59:53 am »
Wow I loved that it was so good! Well done!

xoxoxox

Thank so much for the sig Scotty!! <3 It's gorgeous!

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« Reply #10 on: February 04, 2004, 02:09:31 pm »
;- ) Thanks guys..Tia, Steph, Lisa, Clamicas (again), Rosie & Vanessafan.

Nah, T.  I don't think so...Though not anorexic myself, I really feel for those suffering, that's what this poem is about.
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« Reply #11 on: February 04, 2004, 02:22:18 pm »
Wow... thats really good Cris! Nice work hunnie!
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« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2004, 02:24:46 pm »
You're welcome C! *hugs*

Haven't talked to you much lately...where've you been gurl?!
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« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2004, 04:16:01 pm »
that's awesome!