"Home"

[blueglove]

Alright the old topic was locked so here are the final lyrics. Song to come. It is not the best singing. she shot it on FLM.... anyways


"House"

Some live in a house on a hill
And wish they were someplace else
There's nobody there when the evening is still
Secrets with no one to tell

And some I have known
Have a ship where they sleep
With sounds of rocks on the coast
I sail over oceans five fathoms deep
I can't find what they want the most

And even now
When I'm alone
I've always known
With you
I am home

And some live in towns
Cardboard shack on concrete
All blustered, and busteling life
They search for the color
They never quite see
‘Cause it's all white on white

And even now
When I'm alone
I've always known
With you
I am home

And even now
When I'm alone
I've always known
With you
I am home

For me it's a glimpse
And a smile on your face
A touch of your hands
An honest embrace

For where I lay, it's you I keep
This changing world
And fall asleep
With you all I know is
I'm coming home
Coming home

Sound Clips
Home Clip.mp3 (London OT 6/25/07)

Full Song
Home Canal Room Sound Check

Sheet Music
Home Sheetmusic

EDIT: Added Clips

[reveng_desire]

I don't know you, but I love you. lol

I just hope this doesn't sound like that screeching man boy Daughtry.

[Imaginary Ocean]

I can't wait to hear this song. Thanks Steve ! you rock

[IfICouldFall]

I love the lyrics, although it's kind of pirate-y haha. With all that vodka, she maybe turning into Jack Sparrow. lol  

[NoelleNC]

I don't like the first line, idk it sounds a little odd. Maybe it will mesh better with the melody to go along.

[blueglove]

I don't like the first line, idk it sounds a little odd. Maybe it will mesh better with the melody to go along.

lol the melody of the begining is kinda dull

C, b c d, c d e, d c b

[blueglove]

I am gonna get a clip on here too... it will be in the first post... about 15 minutes it is still sending..

[reveng_desire]

Yaaaaaaaaaaay!

[NoelleNC]

Some live in a house on a hill
They wish they were someplace else
There's nobody there when the evening is still
Secrets with no one to tell

^Am I the only who thinks a 5th grader could have written those lyrics? The rest of the song seems a little better lyrically, but for a first verse that is rather weak.

[reveng_desire]

The first two lines are like....okay, whatever.
The last two aren't that bad. Or I don't know..maybe the 3rd one is good but then the 4th one islike...errrr.

[KULPDOGG]

Some live in a house on a hill
They wish they were someplace else
There's nobody there when the evening is still
Secrets with no one to tell

^Am I the only who thinks a 5th grader could have written those lyrics? The rest of the song seems a little better lyrically, but for a first verse that is rather weak.

I have built a tree house
I have built a tree house
Nobody can see us
'Cause it's a you and me house


...
sometimes the most simple lyrics make the best songs...

[portions.for.foxes]

The simpler something is the catchier it is.

[reveng_desire]

That. Sounds. Beautiful.

So. So. Beautiful.

[portions.for.foxes]

Holy crap.  

Who cares if this song is simple, that clip sounds fucking AMAZING. That's pop-song writing at it's best folks.

[clamicas]

wow, I loved the vocal!

thanx steve =)